"but then im forgetting,
your not here anymore."
The last two lines were great, the whole poem was so heartfelt!!
I loved this one. It's my fave so far!!!
5/5
*Gem*

Omgosh, that was fantastic!!! You're such a great writer!!! I LOVED the last couple of lines, very nicely written. Hope to read more of your poems. *hugz*

Nicely written i really liked it.....its sad but thats how i write..soo nice job...keep it up....

Feeling the same.. love this poem!

Very Nice Jen. I Loved Your Poem

Awww yaaaay glad you all like my poems =)

*~*Jen*~*

Sorry Jen. I really, really wanted to like this poem, because you were so nice about mine. I liked most of the poem, in fact, the only fault for me, was the first stanza, because it was out of place (structure wise).

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'The mermaid' . I love to hear good things, although, critisim and advice is always welcome.

Awww sooo sad :(( i really enjoyed reading it :))

I can ReLate into it.. i would LoVe to see youR next poEm.. youR a good wRiteR.. keep it up..