Wow!!! You have done it again. I love this poem. When You glance at it someone might think that your actually speaking of stars. But as you read on the words take over and show you the true meaning of the poem. I hope this all makes sense to you. So in other words I say bravo on a excellent job. 5/5

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Letty

Wow...that is a great description of friendships abd how they last/die out.....great work!! 5/5

Very good write!
P.S.- I dont think the second star burned out. I think that the clouds just covered it up when things got "vile". Maybe the second star felt like the first star (and the whole rest of the milky way) hated it and wanted it to just suddnely burn out. Hopefully the first one can see the second star again. I'm sure it will never view it the same as before, but maybe it will atleast see that it never burned out, it was just covered by the haze of confusion and misunderstanding. ;)