Wow! great work, i like this one alot, nice work!

keep it up!
5/5

~Murder

Wow. Your structure of your poems are diffrent. I like that though, shows you are creative. Lovely Job.

How vivid an image i got from that poem!! very nicely written!! thanks for the comment!! yeah, that poem was inspired by life events and that song kinda mished and mashed together. i have a few kittens too! lol

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This poem makes no sense to me... I just don't understand it at all. I'd give it a 3, but maybe I'm missing something.

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