Hey dude, thats totally cool, very different but thats a good thing in your case. I like your style crocodile. hayleyxx

whoa that was awesome. really well written. keep it up

You posted this on a very significant day for me! and maybe more appropriate... the ides of march! this just might be my favorite of yours. this is one of those poems where each line is a flawless, independent thought- worthy of standing alone. and to put them all together- so well- is remarkable. profound. so freakin good! 5 for you! you rock! -beav :)

This is really well written!!
Very good vocab.. you dont see many poems like this!
In my eyes this is flawless!!
5/5