Secret

by CaptainTyingKnots   Oct 9, 2006


I keep my secret hidden well
To you I'll never tell
Cause I don't know what you'd do
If you knew

I'll never let my secret show
I'll never let you know
What would you say???
I can't take the chance of you going away

So I lock my feelings deep inside
Cause if you're near and I don't hid
Theres a chance you will see
See the real me

So I keep my secret hidden well
To you I'll never tell
Cause I don't know what you'd do
If you knew that I love you

I made this poem today for school, I did it for english class, I hope you like it!!! Please vote and comment!!! It would mean ALOT to me!!! Thanks for reading!!!

I love you chole!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I keep my secret hidden well
    To you I'll never tell
    Cause I don't know what you'd do
    If you knew <- add to this line . It's too short and throws off your flow .

    The flow is really iffy in this , and I could only tell you certain parts that it really stood out . 4/5

    So I lock my feelings deep inside
    Cause if you're near and I don't hid
    Theres a chance you will see
    See the real me <- Same here .

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueMoon

    THis is Really good, I love it . it also relates to me ^ ^ . Im new at this, if U c my poem I wrote, tell me what U think. hahah, give me some tips.

  • 18 years ago

    by mathew

    Gr8 poem, its so cute, i have sum1 i like and i dont wanna tell them cuz im afraid of what they will do if they knew, nice poem, keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by sasha

    I really liked this poem, its really thoughtfull!! keep up the good work! xx

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