I really liked this poem, its really thoughtfull!! keep up the good work! xx

Gr8 poem, its so cute, i have sum1 i like and i dont wanna tell them cuz im afraid of what they will do if they knew, nice poem, keep writing

THis is Really good, I love it . it also relates to me ^ ^ . Im new at this, if U c my poem I wrote, tell me what U think. hahah, give me some tips.

I keep my secret hidden well
To you I'll never tell
Cause I don't know what you'd do
If you knew <- add to this line . It's too short and throws off your flow .

The flow is really iffy in this , and I could only tell you certain parts that it really stood out . 4/5

So I lock my feelings deep inside
Cause if you're near and I don't hid
Theres a chance you will see
See the real me <- Same here .