Comments : It's too late now!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Wow so sad, I like the way you write
    I especially like:

    The blade slices through my skin,
    Blood trickles like water,
    The pain is reaccuring,

    and:

    I give up on life,
    I give up on helping people,
    When all i ever get is it back in my face,
    I try and fail,

    5/5 nice work
    when will i learn?