It's Too Late

by Arcane Blondie   Oct 9, 2006


Do you notice the signs?
Look for the pain in her eyes,
The loss of passion in her smile,
Withdrawn from the world around,

No, you don`t notice,
She has lived her secret,
Constantly grinding in her mind,
Tearing apart all that`s good,

You could`ve been there,
Helped her through this life,
But now the time is up,
Only her suicide will be remembered.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short but nicely composed, the flow and transition was good. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Excellent! a fan as always!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    But now the time is up,
    Now only her suicide will be remembered.

    [ The only suggestion I have is to maybe take out the "Now" in the last line. Having two of the same words like that kinda throws it off, and it's not really needed there ]]

    This was a very sad poem, though. & I hope you're not feeling this way. I really liked at the start how you opened the poem up with a question, that was great. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah! This poem is so sad! Great but sad. I can relate... I love the way its written! Looking forward to reading more! Keep it up! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    WoW this is another great poem 5/5

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