Ok Ill give you a hint some great poets didnt like so much I's They said that it is so ditructfull and it coz of a low vote

and my commet are just cut down those long lines in to two and make them rhyme to make it better

Geneross

This was good, i agreed totally with the idea,
but the rhyming wasnt that great. i still could relate soo much...thos girls in schooll...they like a guy, and i swear...the next second they're going out....gr =/