The Wonderful Place

by Letty   Oct 10, 2006


Somewhere off in a far distant land is a place that celebrates the life of man.

It's a place where all the wonderful people go. Those that have sacrificed they're all, including their soul.

It's a place for those who have finished their purpose in life. It is where their happiness begins and the ending of their strife.

It's beautiful there. All the flowers are trimmed in gold. Nothing ever dies and it never gets cold.

The streets are cleaned and there's no pollution there. The sun-shines brightly and there is always fresh air.

In the center of this place is a huge golden wall. Over a billion inches wide and incredibly tall.

On this wall is placed the pictures of all those that have made it to the land of the wonderful souls.

You too can make it just treat people right and after your done here you can live real life.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Perfect imagery yet again, amazing flow and words, breathtaking piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Simply Amazing! Your rhyming timed and put in the right places.. and the beat of the poem was incredible! my favorite line is:
    You too can make it just treat people right and after your done here you can live real life.
    Great Job!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by suda

    Hi Letty

    I love this poem and i'd be glad to go to the place described here ,if there is such a place and once my purpose of life has been fulfilled.so hun keep up the wonderful work!

    Love
    Suda,

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like the idea of this poem and how you put it together. Clever. =] Keep it up. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Perfect!
    The scenery/place youve created is just perfect.

    Keep on writing on what you feel and like..
    5/5

    God Bless!