The poem gives me this vision of this wonderful man who becomes more and more of a jerk, and then, with the last line, I felt like I was punching him in the eye (then kickin him in the nads)!! it was great! 5/5, my love!

Wow this poem just spilled emotions on my lap. whoever made you insecure better be sorry. great poem.
oh and thank you for the advice i appreciate it. the poem was meant to be confusing because its about doubt. but the last stanza connects with the first if you look at it. thats why the title is with a question mark put i thank your advice. i would like it you give me more advice on other poems
Take care
HS

Hi there Letty,
I Hope everythings gonna be alright in gods time.

This poem shows alot of emotions, it really took me in.

Another amazing poem. It flowed perfectly, and the emotion expressed very well. Flawless. =] Keep it up girl! You have talent! 5/5

Hi Letty

well i should say it's very interesting and bit sad poem.i do love the atitude of the girl and her next move described in the poem.but i'd like to know more.....Suda!

Great poem babe! I liked it how you threw in some rhyming there :) I like the last lines the best. Flow of the poem was perfect
5/5

Been there done that and could really feel the point. Thank You.

Hmmm what a fabulous poem it express something very emotionally.. very impressive5/5

That was really sad and moving. Another excellent piece.