Comments : Raindrops [Tetractys]

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    So much story told beneath the short lines youve knitted into a poem..
    "small raindrops"- I like this line I guess a meaning is behind this...

    "Foggy windows...miserable, wet winters day."-I feel sadness in this words.

    Good job Tammie.

    Just keep on writing on what you feel and like..

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    You have proved that a little truly goes a long way. You took simple words and turned them into a masterpiece. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice one, you created a picture of a similar day in my mind,lol.
    once again a great poem by you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Rain..rain rain...lol...me like...me like a lot...good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I'm not very good at critizing short poems... But I give you a perfect 5/5 :) Great Job

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Another nice poem!
    you got the talent...
    never let anyone stop you from writting :D:D:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good one. And Good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, even though it was so short, the imagery was excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Sounds like a typical day here in England lol.. Well done on another great poem 5/5 xx

    Yay managed to send a whole message lol.. Sorry about all the attempts it took on Porcelain Doll. :]