Awww Wow...Your A Brilliant Poet...You Need Some More Poems Though But You've Probably Just Started But Cheer Up Life Does Get Easier...Trust Me I Know...Coming From A Person That Was In Your Situation Anyways Back To The Poem :D Great Job I Liked It....5/5
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steph

Wow injtense lvoe it great job..excellent imagery..a w e s o m e

lissa

Nice I like all ur poems they r cool and i get where ur comin from, awesome5/5