Awww wow... The emotion in this poem was amazing... your a great poet i enjoy your work.Your flow was incredible too i know how you feel on this one too...it really does hurt.. but it gets easier someone new will come along :D 5/5
love,
Steph

Wow that was great very intense, try using commas adn periods and watch ur line breaks..excellent love it.

lissa

I know how you feel, and i loved how you portrayed it. you're an awesome writer!!
keep up the great work!!
~maggie