by Brandon Johnson Oct 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
In an endless desert, far away |
I could practicaly see it in my head even though it would have been so much more horrid and herrific in real life but its so sad to know that people are over there dieing for there country and what is right ..good work it realy made me think and appreciate what ive got and the people around me |
by Sweet lig
Hmm yah this is so sad poems and i can feel the emotion nice job5/5 |
by donna
A very touching, heartfelt poem.. Such an emotional write, very well written.. well done 5/5 xx |
by Tammie
That's another really sad poem. Very emotional and flawlessly put together. Keep it up. You have heaps of talent. =] 5/5 |
by Lady Nik
This poem was really good, and it was sad. nice work shanik |