This poem was really good, and it was sad. nice work shanik

That's another really sad poem. Very emotional and flawlessly put together. Keep it up. You have heaps of talent. =] 5/5

A very touching, heartfelt poem.. Such an emotional write, very well written.. well done 5/5 xx

Hmm yah this is so sad poems and i can feel the emotion nice job5/5

I could practicaly see it in my head even though it would have been so much more horrid and herrific in real life but its so sad to know that people are over there dieing for there country and what is right ..good work it realy made me think and appreciate what ive got and the people around me