Nice Haiku u have 5/5

I liked it....short and to the point. 5/5

It's really good for a first, actually lol. But I think if you made it a Double Haiku, it might end up better. Just a suggestion. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

You were almost right. The structure of a Haiku is 5,7,5. But still, its good for your first one. You had an idea of what you were doing, and it worked out fine. Nice write. =]