That is definately the best of yours. Absolutely Amazing. The last stanza, although the shortest, it was the most powerful. It finished it off perfectly. Very excellent write. I'd also like to say thanks for your suggestion for the ending of my poem. It was very good, and i used it instead of mine. I appreciate the time you took for me, thank you. Keep up the great poems, you definately have some talent there! =] 5/5

The battle goes on
Inside my head
I made it back
But I never left

That last stanza was like WOW! Personally, I do not like war and I know a man who went there and he used to tell stories and it's just so heartwrenching. Need I say more...Jpoet*

Omg that was realy realy deep you make sum reali great poems you have a great gift maybe if to could, could you take the time to read some of my poems and tell me how they could be improved i admire your work thanx great job 10/10 man

Wow that wuz great
rlly emotional i loved it
5/5
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