That was such, a sad and, inspirational story ...

Try using stanzas (paraghraphs) it's just easire too keep track at what your reading =)

[..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

Its so sad! Yet its so... good! I really like this story thats been put into it. I really liked the words used. Man how come you dont have loads of comments and votes? Your a great writer! 5/5