Mixed up world

Great poem not as good as that other one i read but this is still good in its own way i liked it:D:D and thanks for the comment on "insanity"

keenan

Ohhh, very interesting write. I like how you seem to confuse the reader, but in a good kind of confusing way. The flow was nice, and although there was a bit of a forced rhyming in a place or two, it was a really nice read. 5/5

I really like this poem
it says a lot

p.s thanks for the comment

Love it

You express yourself with great emotions... it seem to realistic, because of how your spit it out.