Please help me out guys, i am so despirate =-(

That was a rly cute poem! & u wanted some advice, well she could be the one but it could also just be a crush. it seems like u care about her a lot tho 2 write this beautiful poem for her. just follow ur heart. u guys should always be close friends even if things dont work out for being more, so dont worry. u r just a lil scared now. well, i hope i helped some at least. good luck w/everything.
- BgAngeL

Great use of words i love it. it is a beautiful poem. 5/5
~Shandra~

I think she may like me, but i just don't know
Maybe i believe it because i wish it was so

How true that is...we often make up stories in our head's whenever we want something so bad. Good job! The only thing I wasn't fond of was the last stanza, but only because I've heard line similar to that in other poems. Overall though, nice job! Jpoet*

That was good and i can really relate ... im going through the exact same thing ... just with a guy my age. that was good i loved the message but the only thing you might want to work on is the rhymes but other then that it was good!
thanx for the comment and sorry it took me so long to return the favor!

Wow gr8 poem kp it up! she cd b da one........bt wd u wna muk up ur friendship wit er if it trns out she isnt?!? gd luk tk care x

Wow gr8 poem kp it up! she cd b da one........bt wd u wna muk up ur friendship wit er if it trns out she isnt?!? gd luk tk care x

Hey whats up? This was awesome. Thanks for the comment on my poem. do you have any messengers?

Hey this was a pretty good poem! I can totally relate to this. I personally think that you should just trust whats in your gut. If you have any doubts, then its probably not the right thing to do at the moment. But still, you have to decide if you'd rather keep her friendship or tell her, and if you could deal with losing her completely, and, judging by this poem, I dont think you want to do that. Then again, you'll never know until you try! I hope everything works out for you!
>>emily @->-