Well sweety... it is all decay and rustic and everything... then it says she softly dies... that makes the poem a bit out of place. and idk.. your right. it doesnt seem right... something seems.. out of place... but i cant see what.. just let me think... uill tell you on msn when i figure it out.

-Terra

Wow, this is great, u call mine a good sonnet, urz is amazing, but i agree wit Terra, somethng is sorta missing, it all sounds good, but the meaning under the poem is a lil out of sorts, that the only flaw. Great work though, just a few minor adjustment and it'll be rite

'Whitey

Awh, I thought it was really good sweetie.. The flow was great, the imagery was amazing, and the emotion worked well too.. Very nicely done hunny! 5/5

Another good poem5/5