It was an alright poem, there is a few things you could change to make it better. A few lines should be editted for spelling and grammar mistakes. I liked it though.

I think this to be a very good poem, should be a 5, great flow, 5/5!!!

Wow. this is definately my favorite of yours [so far] and i loved it! such power and emotions behind every word that you wrote. i could sense distraught and heartbreak. your writing is equisite here, because it sounds like you are just flowing with your emotions in it. 5/5

Kinda hard to catch onto.
The flow was not that great.
I suggest you keep the same
amount of words as close as
possible in each line if you're
going to combinde the whole thing.
Not the best. God Bless 4/5
<3Tay
Thank you for the comment!
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Great poem, only one question though...was it you or the guy who had the locked heart?....not that it matters, the ideas and emotions were there and conveyed very nicely...great job.

Hm I liked this one as well. I liked how it showed all the emotion of trying to get someone to open up its very hard and if you have to try to hard a lot of people dont have the patience for it so they just give up. I liked the 2nd last stanza because it showed everything just like a picture. all of the struggles on both ends. wonderful work.

This was the best poem or your I have ever read. I loved the message behind it, and the word choice just blew me away. 5/5

When using the word "to," you might want to know that "to" is used as "to you," or "I'm going to..." Fill in the blank!

But when you're saying "to" as in "also" or if you're using it to describe an amount, "to" becomes "too."

So it'd be "too much" and "I'll come, too."
So, just if you didn't know that one...[I imagine you did, just forgot to edit this one first, right?]...yeah.

This poem was good. It was like... pure thought... just, sort of, what you were thinking, I suppose?
I liked it a lot, honestly. It lacks a bit in terms of vocabulary, but, that's not so important once you get down to the meaning, which was very identifiable in this.

So, yeah, I liked it, nice job!

Sad but sweet at the same time. Very hard emotions to capture at once. 5/5