Rose

by Brittany C   Oct 11, 2006


You rarely ever see true beauty,
But a red rose is a sweet thing,
It's petales are soft like a pillow,
A symbol of true love,
It's radians shining like the morning sun,
The beauty of the rose is magic,
Searching you in it's grasps,

A sign of remembrance is the rose,
The red rose being the most lovely of all,
Tells some one that you care,
And that you will always remember them,
And that you thought of them every waking minute,
The rose helps give the world color,
A red rose tells others that you will always remember them.

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Very descriptive.The word choice was excellent.Flow was a little off in parts but all in all it was good.5/5

    btw-my favorite rose is yellow! =P
    -lol-

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Roses are my favorite. I like this poem too. I was vivid, and well penned you did antoher job, and this is the last one, I have returned all 30 comments. Overall, your poems are good, most of them have alot in common, but thats ok its just your thing. I enjoyed all of these. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aww beautiful. I Loved this poem.
    Because I Love roses.
    Not just red, but roses in general.
    Great poem Very cute!
    God Bless 5/5
    <3tay
    ^_^ily

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I agree with Ed Henderson about the symbolism of a rose which you speak about in your poem. However, the poetry itself here was very, very good. I live how vivid the images explained seemed to be. I really enjoyed reading.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Sorry, but I disagree entirely with the symbolism of the rose here. In Britain the rose has an entirely different sybology, and the poppy is the epitome of remembrance. FDor me, the romanticism is lost in the choice of words, which is regrettable as the depth of meaning behind them is to be commended.

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