Wow i love this poem! im suprised no1 has commented so far! it is amazing. i loved these 3 verses!
" I need to know the sun still shines
Behind the gray rain clouds
And that the storm will pass
For a rainbow to come out
I need to know there's greener grass
Even if it's a hill away
Then I must be reminded
That tomorrow comes after today
My cup is still half full
Though I thought the well was dry
And tears can be GOOD things
That fall down from your eyes"
the imagery is amazing and i loved how u used sayings in them.well done and keep on doing what u are doing.. coz it is great.
sophie:)
ps. thanx 4 ur opinion..it was greatly appreciated! :)