Comments : The Reason I Smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Wow i love this poem! im suprised no1 has commented so far! it is amazing. i loved these 3 verses!
    " I need to know the sun still shines
    Behind the gray rain clouds
    And that the storm will pass
    For a rainbow to come out

    I need to know there's greener grass
    Even if it's a hill away
    Then I must be reminded
    That tomorrow comes after today

    My cup is still half full
    Though I thought the well was dry
    And tears can be GOOD things
    That fall down from your eyes"

    the imagery is amazing and i loved how u used sayings in them.well done and keep on doing what u are doing.. coz it is great.

    sophie:)

    ps. thanx 4 ur opinion..it was greatly appreciated! :)