This is beautiful. It reminds me of poetry that I might here in a play. it seems as if you just let the words flow naturally. This is an excellent write. 5/5

Love
Letty

Wonderful piece you have written here. Your use of words fits perfectly together to create an amazing poem. The first line of every stanza are so effective. Great job! =] 5/5

Tammie

Title Again. Please pay more attention to titles. It gives no clue to the concept of the feeling of the poem.

Punctuation again. I will just write your first stanza with the punctuation I feel is proper. Read and see whether you like it:

On ripples from dewdrops,
Here I am.
I fall silently,
In your arms.
For a moment, I belong.

Notice how the flow and pronounciation sound so much better.

In the second stanza the last line "Of your breath" spoils the pronounciation of the poem. Try to fidn words that suit the flow, even after you find the words that express what you exactly want to be felt by the reader.

In the third stanza, "On shaded images from sighs" ?? images derived from sighs?? or is it sights??. Even if it's sights, the line doesn't mean much. It give no clue as to from what sights. Try rephrasing. Also the line "I spin a tale" spoils the thought process of the user, I did not feel the line relative to the stanza, it stands out add.

Nice vision and simple vocabulary.

Relly good writting in this poem... Enjoyable Read... Karms.

Wow...breathtaking poem...I love the repetition of "Here I am". The flow is steady and flawless and your word choice is perfect! I don't think thats there's one thing you should ever change about this piece; Its's amazing! 5/5 =-D

Beautifully done, bravo!!!

I thought this poem was good n i give u a 5/5

You are such a beautiful poet. Your poet is so sweet sometimes it actually brings me to tears. Like now. This poem is filled with so much emotion and deep meaning that I had to read it twice just to make sure that I didn't miss any important details. I loved every single word of it. It flowed wonderfully. Again I say that you are magnificent and you must keep up the brilliant work that you do. 5/5

Love
Letty

"On ripples from dewdrops,
Here I am.
I fall silently,
In your arms,
For a moment, I belong."

I like that . Yher poetry is so beautiful . So much emotion .
Amazing . I lalalalovee this poem .
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I must say this poem inspires me. I'm not much of a love poet. Excellent job, great originality

Wonderful! I really like it! I love the way you used repition. It makes the poem sound really great! Well done and keep it up!! xx

Wow, you're excellent. You're an incredible writer. love it xxx