Tortured Mind

by ForeverYoung   Oct 11, 2006


A lost cause that never finds
Troubled dreams and faded lines
Forever drowning and cursed to be
Losing touch and touch to see

Tortured mind and burning soul
Loss of love; no control
Tears of acid running dry
Reality fading as I cry

Hollow screams echo here
Smell of twisted dying fear
Smile of chaos; pooling blood
Lies of misery; sound of mud

False hopes and blinding pain
Courage hiding and bleeding rain
Sighs of passion and hate of life
Blurry visions an angry knife

Imprisoned happiness locked up tight
Lost the key end of sight
Whispering voices; a trembling sound
Fading faces that cannot be found

Lingering worry and Deafening silence
Bounded hurt; Scars of violence
Moving images captivating danger
Alluring time; reflecting a stranger

Cruel sincerity a broken sign
Fantasy legend; wisdom of mine
Painless markings; horrific disasters
Terrifying loyalty; heart broken masters

One last sound to end it all
With that noise all will fall
Beautiful gun; bullet so kind
Tragic end of my tortured mind

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    ... so emotional...
    good choice of words... and loved the way you have used then to describe the feelings...
    great job...

  • 17 years ago

    by Mikhail Lorenzo Flynn

    Iknow this aint much but wow.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    "Losing touch and touch to see"
    "False hopes and blinding pain
    Courage hiding and bleeding rain
    Sighs of passion and hate of life"

    Very nice, this is the kind of sad poems I like. Poetic and descriptive yet still moving and solemn.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pheadrah

    Woww.... Powerful !! I love itt!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Dang, I love this one too, Your a great poet, Love it!, another profound piece!