Woww.... Powerful !! I love itt!!

"Losing touch and touch to see"
"False hopes and blinding pain
Courage hiding and bleeding rain
Sighs of passion and hate of life"

Very nice, this is the kind of sad poems I like. Poetic and descriptive yet still moving and solemn.

Iknow this aint much but wow.

... so emotional...
good choice of words... and loved the way you have used then to describe the feelings...
great job...