True freedom

by robin milford   Oct 11, 2006


I was closed off
A small ocean in a vast ocean
a lone wolf
you open always petal by petal
myself as spring opens her first rose releasing me from my
solitary confinement
showing me the joy of togetherness

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  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    There is so much in this write...it's deep and emotional. may i speak for your readers. what you write about is unique within itself.. I think there is no comments, because of the energy being felt from your work. the readers are great listeners. your work paints a picture that need no comments. Yet it would be nice to know that someone feels you...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackielynn

    Love it really real lol