This poem is so honest. you write about how you are feeling and what you are thinking. and i wish i could understand how you feel, how upset you are. but i can't really make you feel better, no one can but yourself. best wishes,
moon light night

It's all a dance and I'm not leading.

That's a great line...I love those simile's and metaphors. Thanks for taking the criticism the right way. Cuz sometimes ppl take it like an attack and it's not. We are all on this site to grow! Jpoet*

This is fantastic, i love this poem, thax for thecommenting, bye.

Good poem i liked it

Another job well done! I STILL don't know how to put what you write about into words... I dunno, it's just so well written that it's beyond descrpition. Excellent work, once again!
[*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo

ps - you're one of my favourite! *smiles*

So emotional, and very well done. You've done well in writing this.
And now I'm off to read more of your wonderful poetry.