by kt Oct 11, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I really did believe in them |
by Jessica
I really love it, the begining set it up well. I hate hwen guys do that... Someone would think that after a few tries of that failing, we'd figure it out and they'd figure they need d a new plan heh... or not lol ~()~Jessie |
by becka
This is a good poem. i totally understand it, too. i hate when boys act so nice and end up cheating and lying. this poem is very great in my opinion. |
by *Charisma*
I thought you had a good beginning but I didn't like the ending as much...only an opinion though...you rhyme well! Jpoet* |
by Jane Lowe
Thank you for your comment on my poem "The mirror's truth". it means a lot to me, I'm not quite sure how i feel to be honest, hehe. You ever get that kidn of feeling where you feel angry, or sad, or happy, and you just can't explain it? that's how I feel, only more on the angry abotu to cry section, hehe. :P |