Comments : Just a fairytale

  • 18 years ago

    by Jane Lowe

    Thank you for your comment on my poem "The mirror's truth". it means a lot to me, I'm not quite sure how i feel to be honest, hehe. You ever get that kidn of feeling where you feel angry, or sad, or happy, and you just can't explain it? that's how I feel, only more on the angry abotu to cry section, hehe. :P

    Oh, and I love this poem, so honest and true. :) If only we culd keep living in fairytales and dreams hey?

    Thanx again for the vote and comment!

    x-x-x
    Jane

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I thought you had a good beginning but I didn't like the ending as much...only an opinion though...you rhyme well! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by becka

    This is a good poem. i totally understand it, too. i hate when boys act so nice and end up cheating and lying. this poem is very great in my opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    I really love it, the begining set it up well. I hate hwen guys do that... Someone would think that after a few tries of that failing, we'd figure it out and they'd figure they need d a new plan heh... or not lol ~()~Jessie