Wow, that was amazing. It had awesome images in it and it was very well written. Read over the last stanza though, becase P&Q automatically change a few things and your words have the symbols in them. BUt it was a really good poem. I really liked the ending. Keep it up. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Wow i really do think this poem is amazing, its really good and the words are really powerfull, keep writing because your really good
5/5
me xxxx

Whitey,this is excellent it shows the emotions that come with depression very well. you are a very talented writer.