Wow thats a long one :) but i liket it soo much emotion hidden there :) keep writing and i'll keep reading :))

Hey thanks for the comments on my poems, and this is a very cool poem. I like the fact that u straight up put ur feelings on the paper, and dont restrict yourself by unnecesary rhymes. well done and keep in touch.

Great write and thanks for the suggestion on "As I" i didnt know how to put it all together