Sweet, smart, and to be honest a little silly. If this is a confession all I can say is go for it. A boy doesn't say those things if he's not telling the truth, we are very black and white. The reason can be nothing at all. Absoluteley nothing can be the strongest reason why love exists. When you say you can't see it, I think it represents fear, doubt, and realization of the fact that what is happening is true. Very nice poem it got me thinking, about my own situations too. Peace.

Beautiful poem, great emotion. awesome job.

5/5

Parker

Okay the flow was way off try counting your syllabols it would sound a lot better! Other then that I think you did an okay job on this not one of your best

This poem is really sweet, it reminds my of my baby :D, he saved me from bad things and i mean bad. I dont know why to this day. Its really nice to know someone cares that much

xxx alex xxx

One mistake
3rd Stanza 2nd line mad should be made

other than that this is perfect. The flow fantastic, the word choice awesome, the emtion poweful, and real, perfectly penned amazing 5/5