I only wished the bottom rhymed like the top. Overall though, I really liked the thought behind the poem. Very nice! Jpoet*

Hey, i liked this poem heaps. thax fo the comment, bye.

LOved it! Again! I don't think I'll ever get anough of your poems, honestly! I think writing a poem together would be great; it'll be interesting at the very least! Contact me via personal message,
[*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo (ps 5/5)