I love the poems you write that make you think--- This poem is perfect, there's not one thing you should ever change about it--I love it!!! It's definately another one of my favorites of yours, even though a lot of the poems you write are my favorites =-D Never quit writing; and keep up the wonderful work--- 5/5

Fantastic poem. The concept is one that i havent seen before, thats a good thing. You're unique. Again, i agree with Arcane Blondie. this poem made you think, but i liked that. Also, the understanding part that you put in right after some poems really helps. I'd suggest you continue to do that with any confusing poems. Your on my favorites --- all in all: Great job!