Wow........I love the lines that have the two words repeating twice; It's like I could feel it----Amazing, absolutely amazing---

^ grr u took the words right out of my mouth arcane...lol jk

umm kk this is only the second poem ive read by u but umm...ur on my faves list now :P

You have talent. This poem is incredible. I love how you have the repeating lines they add so much to the poem... im not sure what but it wouldn't be the same without it. Keep writing, i look forward to more--- 5/5

I thinkk this poem could have had more, not emotion cuz this poem doesnt really show any but stronger words i guess. it still had a good flow