Great poem! yes it is short, but you did a great job on it! 5/5

~Kristina

Short but sweet! Love it---the only thing that I caught is that "loose" should be "lose"------Other than that, amazing! 5/5

Not long but very impressive,,, and for me it express alot! nicely written great job5/5

Not long but very impressive,,, and for me it express alot! nicely written great job5/5