Wow this is really good, I liked the flow of it, and i like the way you out the understanding at the bottom of the poem. 5/5

Beautifully written! I love your word choice and the flow is totally flawless. I started reading and was totally captivated by each line--- The way you stated each thought made the poem so deep and it really makes you want to read more-Amazing job, like always! Keep it up--- =-D No doubt a 5/5

Beautiful poem... as i read it i was captivated by how easily everything flowed together. It was a bit confusing but after i read the understanding part you so conviniently provided, it all made sense. Great job. I agree with everything Arcane Blondie said as well. definately 5/5