I really like it. It had good rhythm. My favorite part was "When I see you all I do is smile
But this only happens
Every once and a while"
Great Job!

I love this! Thanks for the comment on my poem awhile ago. Since then Rob (the guy the poem was for) and me have gotten back together =) so I know how you feel with this one. Keep scribbling! See ya round the site, Love Z.