Comments : Neglected by Heaven

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW...loved it. I have no critisims at all. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Good flow,
    Good words,
    Good imagery,
    Good emotion...
    All in all... brilliant poem.
    Loved every line, so keep writing
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    WoW this was very good, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that was a very interesting poem. I don't think, I would ever want to get neglected by Heaven. Very dark poem, it gave me the creeps. Maybe it's because I read it in the dark, I don't know. Anyways, good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. Very well written dark poem. I like the title a lot. The flow was good for the most part, and the idea was original. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha