Comments : Laying Next To Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Absolutely brilliant poem. i feel this wya every night when I go to sleep and when I wake up, no joke. The lines I especially loved were: "So I close my eyes and drift into a world,
    Where you stand beside me.
    And your voice does pierce the silence
    And you are not quite so far away from me."

    Very nice poem. Keep it up!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauraballz

    This is a beautiful poem Tom. Been such a long time since I came on here. Still have nothing to write, seems nothing can give me the inspiration I lost.