Once daddys lil gurl

There once was this girl
who lived a good life
but always was full of pain and strife

she never knew how good it was
until she hung with the wrong crowd and
did things that daddy never allowed

people wanted to know why
she was full of life
but always wrote poetry full of strife

she wrote a poem about a dark world
she was daddy's Lil girl
who lived in a fantasy world
who thought she would give suicide a whirl

look at her now 6feet below
mommy crying as they
lower her nice and slow

fathers saying why did you have to go
to this slow and painful death
nobody knows
why you took your last breath

all we do know she was daddy's Lil girl
who thought she would give suicide a whirl

having her life
be written on a rock
so everyone could pray
the heavens gate they do unlock

please leave a comment about my poetry i would greatly appericiate it thanks Cristi