Aww that's such a beautiful poem. Luv Nicole =)

Its beauituful, i have felt like that many times before

Aww hunny. =( Your feelings are definately mutual. I wish I could have him with me 24/7, but I guess that's not how things work. =P

Great poem though. Terrific flow, ok rhymes...No fixes needed here. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I can relate to this one most. Reading this and thinking about it makes me sad. A sweet and sad poem you have written. Keep it up, you have talent. 5/5

Beautiful poem; it has some deep emotion in it and it really expresses that emotion---The only aspect that might make the poem better is if it was a little bit longer. I seems like you could add a stanza or two and have more details, but that's just one opinion. Overall, great write! 5/5