As I lay here in my bed
Reminiscing about all the things you said
It made me realize
That when I look deep down in your eyes
That you want what's best for me
And you are what a real guy should be
Thank you for making me feel special
I truly am so very grateful.
Good night sweetheart. mwah
This is not one of my poems but a sms I got from the girl that I talked about in my poem "Hard decision" once I sent her the link to it. She read it and said she couldn't rime to save her life, well I think she proved everyone wrong after this sms, for a first try these are really good rimes in my opinion!
What do you guys think? Would you encourage her to continue writing poetry??