Dreams

by The Black Rose   Oct 12, 2006


Dreams of Hate
Dreams of Pain inside
Dreams full of Sadness
Dreams inside my Head

Hated by everyone
Hated by the World
and no one Cares about another
About Feelings and Thoughts

Pain inside my Heart
Pain inside my Head
and the Pain will never go away
Because my Heart was Broken over and over

Sadness in the World
Sadness in my Life
and Nothing can be done
Done about the Sad end of my Life

--
To Spike my twin
Born *10-03-1989*
Died *13-7-2006*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    It was good but not asgood as dreaming i feel here your anger got in the ay of you ability. However giving that it ironically shows your anger whichis good lol. so yep erm.. welldone

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Awsome work.I wish I could pen true emotion like that instead of hiding behind big words and fancy phrases.
    Thank you.

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Whoever spike is i hope hes ok cause he is my bro
    and i luv my bro

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this is so sad and touching. very good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Keath

    As I promised, I react on/read your work.

    I really liked this one; it's cold, tough and sad, but so true;
    Hated by the World
    and no one Cares about another
    About Feelings and Thoughts

    Lovely part. Keep on writing. And I wish you much strength to live with the loss.

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