by Jenni Marie Oct 12, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As i sit here on this cold street |
by angelina
I love this one ... it can be taken two ways .. i could be the way some one may feel as if they are homeless because of the way they are treated or some one actually in this sitution |
by Reborn Rival
My heart is sadend by the way you feel. Life is overwelming hence our tears. I feel like giving up aswell! But I hold on for what? I hold on or I'll never know! |
by Danni
I thought it was really touching and you did a great job of decribing the feelings and emotions of someone like that 5/5 keep up the good worK! |
I really like this poem it some thing i have been through.its hard to live like that.you've done good keep up the work |
by Angie
You are definately a really talented writer. This poem was wonderful and so very sad. You have a way of expressing your emotions and thats what makes your poetry wonderufl to read. Great flow, nicely done. These two stanza's would have to be my favorite: |