I Love this stanza

I'll be there for you
through the good and bad
And i will always remember
the fun times that we have had.

and also the last
that was true and this is definitely great piece just capitalize those I's to make it better great poem again

XD

Geneross

I like the start of this poem, quite simply just because it is different. It shows a more personal touch. I'm not quite sure how to explain what i mean, but yes, i like it. The flow was good, and shows a story of great friendship. A great write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

You are a really good poet, and a very kind-hearted individual. Your poetry dedications are very well written, but also very caring. There is a lot of love that goes into it, for the people you write about. That is really rare for most people, keep writing, and keep loving! lol, take care :)

This poem was absolutely wonderful. I loved how you began this poem, it was different. You had a great flow throughout. This poem was once again, so sweet. I have a cousin thats really close to me as well, and she's one of my best friends.

Anyways, I especially loved the lines:

"At times we've both lied
even made each other cry
But if anything were to happen to you
Put simply, i would die."

Beautiful. 5/5

--Angie xoxo

I loved it! i have a cousin that means the same to me! keep it up
-heather