Wow
that was amaze
your words speak wat the eyes cannot see and '
your lips speak wat heart can feel

A lovely poem!and well written.keep up the good work.x

But I never saw your tears
When I turned and walked away
And the absence of those tears
Said much more than words could say.
^^ Wow.. That stanza left me completely speechless. The truth in it hit home. hard. You did an amazing job on this poem. You really know how to express your emotions very well and make the reader feel exactly what you are feeling. Great job on this! You are a very talented poet. Keep it up! 5/5

Now this is a poem that I can truly relate to. I seem to be having the exact same problem at this time. You sure know how to open up the heart and mind. Keep writing these beautiful poems. 5/5

Love
Letty

Beautiful. 5/5

Good job keep it up 10/10

Beautiful

"Note: I write a poem, to wake the words my heart calls, and they come in clusters or not at all, confused and dazed, they know not rhyme. I thought words were meant for beauty,..."

The life of a real poet aye? This was such a well written piece.

Bert
What a stunning breath taking piece you have penned. The sadness and dispair of a love that is lost really rips at the heart of the reader. Excellent write.

~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
Take care my friend.
Cindy

I like it a lot. It was well written.

Gee, this is simply beautiful!! I love it, it's sad but the words I recognize very well, he he!

5/5 Ingrid

Hate it when someone gives advice about a poem...if poetry was politics it would be anarchy...everyone is free to write through his feelings...don't spawn useless borders with no reason...I loved the poem ;)

Words can not express how beautiful this poem is.

I have never read a poem that relates so much to me...
its unfortunate to know that other people feel this unlucky..
i totally understand where your coming from
simply beautiful!

Marissa

Wow....wow....wow....pretty damn ahmazing good job. keep it up!

Truely magnificent was the poem, as was the note at the end. i myself can relate to this poem and u tell of the feelings to well. =)

You're wonderful at writing poems. :O

I had to re-read this because your work is inspiring, and i thought id say that in the Note at the end, it might have a nier flow if the last line read:
A feeble quest, my song of love sings in your breast.
just a small suggestion.